Filmmakers!
Having trouble making your solid story ring true due to stiff, colorless conversation?There's a script doctor in the house for that!
I can make your dialogue:
more authentic
more colorful
character specific
move your narrative
Take my free, no-risk challenge.
Send me one scene of your choosing and give me three business days. I will rewrite the dialogue at no charge. If you like my work, you can hire me to write as much or as little of the remaining dialogue as you want for a flat $1,000 per week on a week-by-week basis (partial week prorated).
I have no Hollywood pedigree. All I have is talent, integrity, and 50+ years as a film buff. My writing samples are below.
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Ready to get the ball rolling?
E-mail or call me, Gene Grubb.
Simply send either the whole screenplay (indicating which scene I am to work on) or just the one scene you want improved. I have Final Draft 13 and Microsoft Word.
I will need some context, of course. Think of me as an actor that you are preparing for Take One. You want me to know how the scene fits into the narrative as a whole, plus the tone and pacing you want. I will also need a brief sketch of the characters involved.
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